Sunday, October 14, 2012

Open Prompt #2


1980. A recurring theme in literature is the classic war between a passion and responsibility. For instance, a personal cause, a love, a desire for revenge, a determination to redress a wrong, or some other emotion or drive may conflict with moral duty. Choose a literary work in which a character confronts the demands of a private passion that conflicts with his or her responsibilities. In a well-written essay show clearly the nature of the conflict, its effects upon the character, and its significance to the work.
            If you had the choice between a life of security and respectability, or a life of passion, which one would you choose? Or would you try to have it all? In F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby, this is the choice that Daisy Buchanan must make more than once, and it his her difficulties making this choice that causes problems for her—as well as for others.
Throughout the work, Daisy Buchanan must deal with her conflicting feelings between Tom Buchanan and Jay Gatsby. Tom is a good American, who attended college and has loads of money. In other words, he is the respectable man for Daisy to marry. He is the man her family expects her to pick. However, Daisy is passionately in love with another man, Jay Gatsby. The problem is that Gatsby does not have a respectable family name, a respectable job, or a respectable amount of money. This is the conflict that Daisy deals with before marrying Tom. The majority of the book explores this issue later in their lives, after Daisy has already been married to Tom and has a child. Jay Gatsby moves into the house across from the Buchanan’s, and him and Daisy end up meeting to have tea. From that point on, Daisy wrestles between her feelings and passion for Jay Gatsby, and her desire to remain wife to Tom Buchanan.
            Daisy’s conflicting feelings cause many problems for her. In fact, the night before her wedding to Tom, Daisy drinks herself into a stupor and almost calls the whole wedding off. Many years later, Daisy does not hold many moral dilemmas about starting an affair with Jay Gatsby. However, she refuses to leave or tell Tom about the affair (as Gatsby wants her to do). This causes problems as Tom begins to invite Jay to parties and dinners. Neither Daisy nor Gatsby can hide their love for each other, and Tom does not remain oblivious for long. The conflict comes to a head when Tom, Daisy, and Jay all find themselves in a private room during a sweltering day in New York City. Gatsby and Tom have a confrontation, and Daisy is forced to choose between the two of them. She realizes she cannot have the best of both worlds, and chooses respect and security over passion. Driving home, in her anger and sadness, she hits a woman and kills her.
            Daisy’s personal war between her passion and her responsibility plays a significant role in The Great Gatsby. Her conflicting feelings are the driving force of the novel. Jay’s whole reason for moving close to the Buchanan’s, the reason that he throws these huge parties, is all for Daisy. If Daisy did not have feelings for Gatsby, there would be no novel. This conflict that she has plays a particularly significant role at the end of the novel, when she hits that woman. The woman wasn’t some random stranger; it was actually Tom’s mistress. This is ironic, since the day Daisy’s affair with Jay ends, Tom’s affair with his mistress ends as well. That irony would not be present if it wasn’t for Daisy’s internal conflict.
            Over all, Daisy’s internal struggle between her love for Jay Gatsby and societal obligation to her husband, Tom Buchanan, causes problems not only for her, but for other characters as well in The Great Gatsby. She refuses to accept the fact that she will never be able to have everything that she wants. It’s simply not possible for her to have both men, which Daisy does not realize until the end.

4 comments:

  1. This is a perfect example of "passion vs. responsibility". Your response is very well-written, and explores the points you were trying to make very well. Daisy represents this idea flawlessly, and you proved this point. The only thing that may make this response better would be the use of textual evidence; that is, if a source was available. You did give many good examples, and you described them very well. Your ideas are well-organized and your warrants are pretty well developed. good job!

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  2. I think this is a great example because one man represents the responsible choice and one man is the passionate choice. You did a great job providing details and giving a good summary of the story line. The only advice I would have is to not make it so lengthy and cut out unneccasary details. Over all this a really well written and you do a great job of showing how the conflict effects the characters life and the story line of the book.

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  3. You do a good job here using warrants that justify your examples--this was a concern for your peer reviewers last month and I see that you have given it some thought in this month's essay. In your thesis, though, you don't make a clear statement about what the overall meaning of Gatsby is--and this causes problems later on, in your final paragraphs when you are trying to tie Daisy's conflict to the book's theme. What you really end up doing is just showing how Daily's conflict drives the book's plot--and this is not at all the same as showing how her conflict sheds light on Fitzgerald's message.

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  4. Because I haven't read "The Great Gatsby" yet, it's hard to comment on your analysis without being hypocritical. I have read the book's summary on Sparknotes (not that that counts for much), and a reoccurring idea that I picked up on was the tension between Daisy and Tom, even before Gatsby entered the picture. You touch on that a bit when referencing Daisy's actions the night before marrying Tom, but I think it could be expanded on. Tom's infidelity and the tension between him and Daisy could add depth to the Daisy-Tom struggle - the two of them staying together even though they don't love one another anymore. Both characters are fulfilling society's expectations even though they're just going through the motions, empty.
    Following the required prompt - how does Daisy's struggle affect the significance of the work? Although you touched on that with death of Gatsby and Tom's mistress being linked, it might make more of an impact to show how significant this is to the plot. I mean, with those deaths everyone's lives fell apart! (Quite ironic, don't you think?)
    This is just a thought, and I feel a bit odd making suggestions because I haven't read the book...but I hope my comments helped!

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